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The structure of your jaw was realigned once you learned how to smile.
The Lord blessed you like the salt of the Earth - and you unfurled with time.
You, just like a desert rose that's weathered winter although suffused with brine,
can now smile like you mean it; your heart ensconced in prism lights.
You whet my curiosity with words that transcend space and time.
All your queries have no answers, but more questions - and that blows my mind.
I am accustomed to your smile, but even more, the way you fill this space with light.
Your beauty is not perfection--but the knowledge that we're all sublime.
Soft airs escape you, although you still wear the Summer's scent
and the Spring clings to you like supple, Morning's dew.
I pray I won't regret you; while I stray the paths you strew
the shadows your face felled and overthrew.
Your round patrician's nose and too-far-set eyes are a model of asymmetrical allure.
Like your tongue that moves so fast, you've affixed my brows with blank surprise;
your words licking like a flame treads gaseous paths.
The Lord blessed you like the salt of the Earth - and you unfurled with time.
You, just like a desert rose that's weathered winter although suffused with brine,
can now smile like you mean it; your heart ensconced in prism lights.
You whet my curiosity with words that transcend space and time.
All your queries have no answers, but more questions - and that blows my mind.
I am accustomed to your smile, but even more, the way you fill this space with light.
Your beauty is not perfection--but the knowledge that we're all sublime.
Soft airs escape you, although you still wear the Summer's scent
and the Spring clings to you like supple, Morning's dew.
I pray I won't regret you; while I stray the paths you strew
the shadows your face felled and overthrew.
Your round patrician's nose and too-far-set eyes are a model of asymmetrical allure.
Like your tongue that moves so fast, you've affixed my brows with blank surprise;
your words licking like a flame treads gaseous paths.
Literature
Desirous Avowal
Savouring the breath of each word whispered from your lips,
I am left in desperate need to have the essence of your being beside me.
So tell me dearest to my heart,
Tell me that you love me..
Tell me my sweet serenity,
And tell me true,
That you need me as I do you.
For these confessions of the heart,
Stripping me of all sanity,
Weakening me with each blow,
Provide the strength in me,
To be all I want to be.
These silent suffocations,
That leave me gasping; beckoning,
Send a scorching blaze of heat through my body,
Burning the fire of my desire,
To be all you want me to be.
Literature
A Kiss
Do you recall that day when you kissed someone special?
The time she gave your most awaited prize, a medal.
I mean, when the clock stopped, and you were alone with her.
And when you lost control of yourself and gasped for air.
You pulled her near, closer, until you became just one.
Your heart beat faster and you felt the heat of the sun.
And because it was your first time, you thought This is fun!
Those glaring blue eyes revived the Phoenix inside you.
You wanted her so much. And you just don't want to rest.
It was as if those fingers that traveled from your chest,
To your back, face, then intertwined with your hands like glue
Made
Literature
Not a Love Poem
You asked me to write you a love poem today.
So here I am,
All at a loss as to what I should say.
I've spent days just trying to write something out
But nothing would work
And all I have is this.
Because you must understand that
I will never lie to you and
You must understand that
I cannot say
"I love you."
Because I do not know if it would be true.
But will it help if I say that every word I have ever spoken to you has been God's
honest truth?
I'm afraid that
When we touch,
There is no electricity and
There is no spark.
But will it help if I say that when I'
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This was a bit of a personal challenge for me, written for a co-worker at work. She asked me to simply write her something she'd like to hear from a man who loved her... From there, I simply let my imagination run wild. Hopefully, it'll be to her standards.
This was a bit of a personal challenge for me, written for a co-worker at work. She asked me to simply write her something she'd like to hear from a man who loved her... From there, I simply let my imagination run wild. Hopefully, it'll be to her standards.
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Wow. This is full of some really raw imagery and some really brilliant descriptions. I love this piece!
I have a few things that bothered me, but as with all i suggest this is your work and you are free to ignore my comments xD
Why are you capitalising things like "Morning's" The seasons i can slightly understand more. But i'm not sure there is a need for the capitalisation of "morning" unless you've got a reason in mind?
I'm probably gonna sound so stupid now, but what does "strew" mean? XD
And whats a "patrician"? I'm not sure that's such a good description of the nose, since i doubt i'm the only one who doesn't really understand and, therefore, can't see it. In my head she's missing a nose xD
Those are my suggestions anyway. Hope there was something helpful there!
I have a few things that bothered me, but as with all i suggest this is your work and you are free to ignore my comments xD
Why are you capitalising things like "Morning's" The seasons i can slightly understand more. But i'm not sure there is a need for the capitalisation of "morning" unless you've got a reason in mind?
I'm probably gonna sound so stupid now, but what does "strew" mean? XD
And whats a "patrician"? I'm not sure that's such a good description of the nose, since i doubt i'm the only one who doesn't really understand and, therefore, can't see it. In my head she's missing a nose xD
Those are my suggestions anyway. Hope there was something helpful there!